In many countries large amounts of foods are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays,
foods
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are being wasted in most
of
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the
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countries
. Not only that, the number of
wastage
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is increasing rapidly. In my opinion,
people
waste
food
because of overbuying and lack of appropriate planning. These are some possible
reason
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why
people
waste
food
in
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large amounts these days.
First
of all,
people
waste
food
in
such
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way
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because of overbuying them. Whenever
people
buy
foods
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or any sort of eating items, they do not think about their ability to eat them.
Thus
, they overbuy
foods
and
wastes
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them.
However
, not everyone
do
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this
willingly or intentionally. Most
of
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the
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people
do not bother to give a thought about
this
process of wasting
food
. If
people
become more conscious and focused
about
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what they are doing,
then
this
type of
wastes
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can be minimized easily.
For instance
, whenever we go to a restaurant or any kind of
food
court, we should feel our appetite before ordering
food
.
This
is how we can decrease the
amount
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of
wastes
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. Another reason
people
waste
food
in many
countries
because of lack of appropriate planning. Planning is the key
for
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everything to
be settle
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down. We must
plan
before doing anything or everything.
People
in many
countries
, go for a lunch or dinner outing without planning properly.
Thus
, they
wastes
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food
unconsciously.
Moreover
, they do not think about their capability of having
foods
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. To be with the flow, many
people
order
foods
that they are not used to
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. These are the key points
people
do
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usually because of inappropriate planning.
For example
, we should
plan
before hand
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beforehand
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and should know our adaptability regarding
foods
. If we
plan
appropriate
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before
go
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to a restaurant,
then
we can minimize the
wastes
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of
food
. In conclusion,
food
wastes
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can be minimized easily if we stop overbuying and if we
plan
properly before
buy
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buying
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or
order
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ordering
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anything.
This
is how
,
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not only in many
countries
but
also
every
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country can save
food
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • food waste
  • excessive
  • portion sizes
  • expiration dates
  • storage
  • preservation
  • inefficient
  • cultural
  • incentives
  • reduce
  • awareness
  • education
  • planning
  • organization
  • misinterpretation
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