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In many countries large amounts of foods are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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 is increasing rapidly. In my opinion,
people
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waste
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food
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 because of overbuying and lack of appropriate planning. These are some possible
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 why
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waste
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food
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large amounts these days.
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 of all,
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waste
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food
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 because of overbuying them. Whenever
people
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 buy
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foods
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 or any sort of eating items, they do not think about their ability to eat them.
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, they overbuy
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 and
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 them.
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, not everyone
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 willingly or intentionally. Most
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people
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 do not bother to give a thought about
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 process of wasting
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 become more conscious and focused
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 what they are doing,
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 can be minimized easily.
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, whenever we go to a restaurant or any kind of
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 court, we should feel our appetite before ordering
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.
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. Another reason
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waste
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food
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 in many
countries
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 because of lack of appropriate planning. Planning is the key
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 down. We must
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 before doing anything or everything.
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 in many
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, go for a lunch or dinner outing without planning properly.
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, they
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food
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 unconsciously.
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, they do not think about their capability of having
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. To be with the flow, many
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 order
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 that they are not used to
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. These are the key points
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usually because of inappropriate planning.
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, we should
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beforehand
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 and should know our adaptability regarding
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. If we
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appropriate
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go
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 to a restaurant,
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 we can minimize the
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 of
food
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. In conclusion,
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 can be minimized easily if we stop overbuying and if we
plan
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 properly before
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 or
order
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 anything.
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 not only in many
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every
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 country can save
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • food waste
  • excessive
  • portion sizes
  • expiration dates
  • storage
  • preservation
  • inefficient
  • cultural
  • incentives
  • reduce
  • awareness
  • education
  • planning
  • organization
  • misinterpretation
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