You work for an international company and you need some time off to attend a family celebration. Write a letter to the company’s manager. In your letter:  give details of the celebration  explain the reason why you need time off  suggest a way to have your work done during that time

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter in connection to my request for time off from my work to celebrate the family event.

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month, my younger brother is getting married and the event will continue for 7 days because there is a tradition in desi families to have multiple events

such

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as mehendi day, Wedding ceremony and Valima reception. Since I am the elder one in my family and my father alone could not take all the responsibilities.

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, I will have to take care of different kinds of arrangements which include arranging catering services, booking a banquet and disbursement of wedding cards among family members,

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, I need leave for a month from the

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week to become a part of

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occasion.

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I will manage to complete my tasks on a regular basis since my work can be performed online, there could be some delays because I will do it late at night or whenever I will be free. I would be grateful if you would provide me with a 30 days leave. I look forward to receiving your response soon. Yours faithfully, Arsalan Farooq

Submitted by arsalanfarooqned on Thu Dec 15 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

191 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Request for leave
Family milestone
Ceremonial occasion
Advance notice
Dedicated employee
Delegation of duties
Seamless transition
Workload management
Collegial support
Gratitude for understanding
Continuity of operations
Resuming duties

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You work for an international company and you need some time off to attend a family celebration. Write a letter to the company’s manager. In your letter:  give details of the celebration  explain the reason why you need time off  suggest a way to have your work done during that time

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and town, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?