Successful sport professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in order important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, many
people
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not the same ideas about the salary of athletes which should not be equal to alternative experts' income
such
as doctors, engineers, etc. There
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a rational
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on both sides of
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contentious topic which will be discussed in detail, followed by my own take on the matter. On the one hand, in my country,
sport
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professions
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are celebrities .
That is
, they are unbelievably popular and
also
people
are passionate about following every
sport
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competitions on TV or social
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which caused manifold money for broadcasts organs.
Moreover
, owing to
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famous, the sportsmen are given huge salaries not only by their own federations and administrators
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but
also
by utilizing their fame for other businesses
such
as establishing a restaurant, shop, cafe ,etc. Take " Ali Daei " the previous champion who owned a fancy restaurant for now in Tehran as a remarkable example; he is one of the richest athletes in Iran .
However
, he is
also
well-known as a gallant and generous person. It is my firm conviction that
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some other
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deserve to be valued financially more than
sportive
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occupations. To give an illustration, doctors who have been studying for
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life to save
people
against
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diseases work really hard ,so they are worthy of
earn
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much
further
income .
On the other hand
, the downside is not ignorable. There are individuals
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standed
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on the opposite side who believe sporty professions are likely to be given huge money
as a result
of spending their life up close to danger and pressure .
In other words
, they might be injured during the difficult and breathtaking exercises in order to take part even in a simple competition.
Hence
, there is an undeniable possibility that one gives up his
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consequence
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of bearing too much pressure.
For instance
, " Messi " did not keep on
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sportive activities after breaking his leg during exercise. To conclude, there are different opinions among humans about
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of currency that athletes and alternative functions earn. Several
people
, including me, assert that risky and laborious positions which our health or living depends on them
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must
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in
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of
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currency, not works based on entertainment and commerce.
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  • exceptional talent
  • dedication
  • entertainment value
  • revenue
  • ticket sales
  • advertisements
  • sponsorships
  • short-lived career
  • physical and mental challenges
  • compensation
  • limited career span
  • health risks
  • financial rewards
  • disproportionate emphasis
  • intellectual contributions
  • social contributions
  • undervaluing
  • societal perception
  • income distribution
  • valuable
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