Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live . Discuss both sides and give your opinion .

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more and more inquisitive about

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space

investigations.It is believed

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some sections of society that

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exploration is meaningless and it is a waste of resources,whereas others believe that

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space

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is very important for mankind.Considering today’s circumstances,

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both views as far as I am concerned I am in the favour of the latter notion. To commence with,according to some sections of society,the government should use that much amount in the positive development of the nation

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researches

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it

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,

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equipments

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of

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space

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and

also

the process of that

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consume an

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amount of money,which should

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on

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multiple facilities in order to provide individuals

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live

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.

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,there

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not

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surety provided by the scientists that all the

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will

be succeed

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.

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,many countries tried to land their spacecraft on Marc but in the

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they got failed.In spite of doing

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if the government provided facilities to the

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lead their nation in positive ways.

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,considering today’s circumstances,increasing the rate of pollution with

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time

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the earth’s environment and not only

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but

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the population rate is increasing rapidly.So it is oblivious that,the earth could not handle the cruelty of these generations.so looking for

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better place to live has become

only

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way to secure our future.

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,by exploring

universe

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the universe

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,we could be able to find out the planet where

people

could live and

also

we can observe the atmosphere of that planet.

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,recently

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organisation named Tesla sent their

spacecrafts

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spacecraft

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moon

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and Marc and they found

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some evidence of water which is

positive

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sight for the

people

. In conclusion,

although

some experiments faced failure,

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,by doing

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again and again we could be able to migrate

in

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an

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universal

space

.considering those consequences I firmly stand with the

second

statement.