you have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter explain Why you want to leave your current job - I completed my masters in accountant . got job in that . describe what kind of job you are looking for - I was looking for accountant , who can deal with bank ask for some help or advice : As you are working in bank as accountant
Dear Annie,
I hope you're doing well !
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just writing to let you know that I have decided to Correct your spelling
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quite
my Correct your spelling
quit
job
soon because I want to build career
in my field .
As you know , I am working Add an article
a career
part-time
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job
in the
restaurant in order to pay my daily life expenses and Correct article usage
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also
, doing study
on the side . I just finished my Add an article
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three years
master's degree in accounting ,Correct your spelling
three-year
therefore
, looking for job
as Add an article
a job
a
accountant.
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looking for Correct your spelling
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junior
accountant Correct article usage
a junior
job
in any firms
for Fix the agreement mistake
firm
beginning
.When I will gain Add an article
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a beginning
few
years of experience Correct article usage
a few
then
I would like to open my office in the future . In order to sharpe
my skills , Correct your spelling
sharpen
i
need to work in Change the capitalization
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professional
environment for some years.
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a professional
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job
because you're Add an article
a job
the job
former
accountant in the HR Company . If you have good connections there , Add an article
a former
then
it would be easy for me to apply for open positions . I would be really greatful
to have you Correct your spelling
grateful
my
friend ,as you always helped me in difficult situations .
Look forward to Add the comma(s)
, my
meet
you.
Best wishes,
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meeting
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