you have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter explain Why you want to leave your current job - I completed my masters in accountant . got job in that . describe what kind of job you are looking for - I was looking for accountant , who can deal with bank ask for some help or advice : As you are working in bank as accountant

Dear Annie, I hope you're doing well !
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just writing to let you know that I have decided to
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quit
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my
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soon because I want to build
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in my field . As you know , I am working
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job
in
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restaurant in order to pay my daily life expenses and
also
, doing
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on the side . I just finished my
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master's degree in accounting ,
therefore
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as
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accountant. Well!
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looking for
junior
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accountant
job
in any
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for
beginning
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.When I will gain
few
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years of experience
then
I would like to open my office in the future . In order to
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sharpen
my skills ,
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need to work in
professional
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a professional
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environment for some years.
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looking for your help to find me
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a job
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because you're
former
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accountant in the HR Company . If you have good connections there ,
then
it would be easy for me to apply for open positions . I would be really
greatful
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grateful
to have you
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friend ,as you always helped me in difficult situations . Look forward to
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you. Best wishes, Roopkamal.
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Spelling and Accuracy
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Detail and Development
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Task Response
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Coherence and Cohesion
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