All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this? What are the effects?
All over the world,the number of obese
people
is increasing .The possible main causes could be a lack of physical exercise and dietary structure. Use synonyms
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issue can Linking Words
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bring some major health and social issues in our societies .
It is undeniable that an increasing number of Linking Words
people
are used to having a large amount of fast food in their daily intake and Use synonyms
also
less physical exercise in their daily activities when compared to the past few decades. Linking Words
Although
medics are suggested to consume more healthy diet like fruits and vegetables, many Linking Words
people
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difficult to perform exercises and some gyms are Linking Words
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expensive to join by Linking Words
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who cannot afford to pay for them.Unless authorities build more public fitness centres, Use synonyms
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problem will remain the same in the future as well.
Undoubtedly,the overweight problem could bring many health and social problems . In the UK, Linking Words
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suffer serious heart attacks frequently and their heart muscles are not capable to engage their functions properly because of less exercise and obesity. Use synonyms
Moreover
, a large number of overweight office workers may experience body shaming in their workplaces , especially female workforces . Linking Words
Consequently
, that can lead to some issues like less motivation and confidence at their workplaces.
To summarize,it is true that a large portion of obese Linking Words
people
is increasing in our societies because of a lack of relevant diet plans and physical activities. Use synonyms
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issue will Linking Words
also
bring some major health and social problems unless we are not paying attention to it .Linking Words
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