Shortage of houses has become a severe problem in the cities today and only the government can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this.

Nowadays, overpopulation has caused major problems

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as a lack of housing and accommodation. In fact, housing shortages impact

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living conditions in society. Some people believe that

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government

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the government

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is entirely responsible for resolving

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issue. Personally, I totally agree that the

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should control

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situation.

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, the

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of

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is a large process and

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process demands a great deal of money and resources.

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procedure involves buying land, providing materials,

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as concrete, cement and wood, and

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the house. All the expenses in these different steps should be funded by tax payments.

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, in recent years, Dublin

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have

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to live in the

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overpopulation. I am looking for an apartment there and It is impossible, I have to live one hour from the

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centre.

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, in most of the cities, housing is an issue that

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to be controlled for two main reasons. First of all, there are many abandoned areas in some cities that could be converted into

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or public spaces. But normally, most of these spaces

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private

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that have a negative impact

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the

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a positive one.

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, housing needs

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planning and regulation. There are many green areas that need to

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of building there. In my opinion, these places are an integral part of an urban area that improves living conditions.

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, the

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could forbid the construction in these parts of the

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. In conclusion, the

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should develop more areas to build more

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in parts that are abandoned.