Write a letter to your friend who is planning to visit your hometown, giving them information on things to do and see while they are there

Dear Joy, It's been so long since we were in touch, but I haven't forgotten the wonderful time we spent

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year. I'm glad to know that you're planning to visit Paris. It's a wonderful city with a lot to explore, but you won't be able to see everything in just three days. You should definitely not miss the Eiffel Tower and the Louvre Museum, both of which are amazing and popular tourist spots. To avoid crowds, you should book tickets in advance through an online application. My flatmate will be going on a ten-day vacation next month

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on the 15th. If you can plan to come around that time, you can stay with me

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we can bring back our golden days. I hope we'll see each other soon. With love, Jennifer

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Dec 20, 2022

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Add more ideas to see and do, like parks, markets, or a river walk.

structure

Put every new idea in its own part so the read is easy.

clarity

Make the plan clear with dates so it is easy to follow.

tone

Warm tone and nice start.

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It gives two good places to see and how to avoid crowds.

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It shows a kind plan to stay at home to visit again.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

134 words

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The Closing

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