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Some people argue that the public should be allowed to have guns. Others do not agree. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

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These days, people often keep a gun or weapon in their house or workplace if they are allowed to do it.
However
 , in my opinion, in case they need to use these types of tools, they could hurt or kill someone else. To elaborate, nowadays, people can purchase a particular arm if they request
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permission to keep it.
As a result
 , especially those who live or work in a dangerous area well known for a higher rate of crimes often decide to own a gun or weapon. They might certainly use it to protect themselves and someone else they stay with from a thief or another type of criminal they run into in case he or she has the intention to treat them looking for money or other precious items.
However
, in my opinion , if someone decides to buy an arm, he or she makes never a good decision. Indeed, I often read
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listen
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 bad news regarding
this
 topic.
For instance
 ,
last
 week a magazine I have the habit to buy reported that a man who went
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 the bedroom of his daughter without switching the light murdered her because he had thought that she was a thief .
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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