Smacking childern is the best form of discipline To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Disciplining
children
is always been a crucial and difficult task for parents since the beginning of mankind. Some people believe that hitting
children
is the best
way
to teach them a lesson while others think it will bring negative impacts
to
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the
children
. I definitely think that smacking
children
is not an effective
way
to shape
childrens'
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behaviour.
First
of all, hitting
children
is giving them a very bad example of using violence to solve
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the problem
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problem
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.
Children
are very impressionable and they will take
this
to their hearts and think that physical violence is a
way
to sort things out. If
a
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child cant
take
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it out on
adult
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adults
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who are stronger
then
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than
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them physically, they might let it out
to
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those who are weaker ,
for
instance
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their younger siblings,
the
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schoolmates or even on small animals.
This
in future will
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create
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many social problems
such
as domestic abuse ,
sexual
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and sexual
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and physical
assualt
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assault
, as when they grow up, they will continue to use violence to achieve their wants.
Secondly
, hitting
children
will make them feel that they are not wanted or loved. As we all know,
children
look up to their parents and are always seeking
thier
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their
love and approval.
However
, they do
no
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not
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necessarily have the mental capacity to understand the good intention of the parents, which is to discipline them so they will not repeat the same mistake. They will feel hurtful , especially if the pain is imposed by the very person that they admire the most.
This
emotional pain might haunt them till they are bigger, and the feeling of worthlessness will make them become less confident with low
self esteem
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. What is worse is they might abuse
drug
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drugs
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or alcohol to numb
this
emotional burden that they carry with them since young,
genereting
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generating
a generation with
alot
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a lot
more social problems. in conclusion, beating
children
might seem to be an instantaneous
way
to discipline
children
but in a long
run
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it will only produce
young
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a young
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adult
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adults
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who
are
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more
rebelious
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rebellious
and violent, which in
tunr
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turn
, will only bring more problems to the society and nation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • discipline
  • smacking
  • punishment
  • behavior
  • childhood
  • communication
  • rebellion
  • consequences
  • alternatives
  • psychological impact
  • constructive
  • authoritarian
  • neglectful
  • abusive
  • controversial
  • divisive
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