As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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It has become increasingly common for people to access the
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electronically rather than with traditional print media with many commentators suggesting that
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could spell the end for
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. I would agree with
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and think that in the future
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will disappear.
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of all,
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accessed online has much more interactivity than in a newspaper.
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are given the option of commenting on
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and discussing items on message boards.
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, there is no limit to the number of photographs that could be included with a story with many sites even giving
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the opportunity to upload their own photos and videos. Another point to make is that
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read on the internet is much more current than in a newspaper. It is possible for
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to read about breaking
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and watch these
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develop,
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as the emergence of a war or hostage negotiation.
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is compared with
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which only report on the previous day’s events.
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, they seem increasingly dated even before they hit the newsstands.
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, online
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offers
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much more
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and a wider range of information. It is possible to read the same story from a range of different sources on the internet.
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, a
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article with a left-wing stance compared to one with a more right-wing agenda. Some people suggest that
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allows for a more balanced view than only reading the story in one newspaper as you can compare different viewpoints and the way
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are presented.
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is compared with traditional
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which have much more editorial bias. In conclusion, I would argue that in the future it will become increasingly difficult to sell
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. The fact that online
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offers more interaction and choice and is more
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means that traditional printed
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will not be able to compete and will disappear.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Access
  • Convenient
  • Fast
  • Expensive
  • Wider range
  • News sources
  • Perspectives
  • Readership
  • Demographics
  • Physical
  • Tangible
  • Reading experience
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