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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Everytime
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,
people
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 go to
the
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other stations, when they travel or move to other places and now humans do it by cars, trains or planes, so some
people
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 think that the
government
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 should invest more
money
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on
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 railways rather than
roads
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.
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 essay disagrees with
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 statement and will answer why.
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 of all,
roads
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 for cars are as important as railways and if the
government
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 stops spending
money
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 on
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 kind of road, it can lead to many problems. When the
government
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 does not spend
money
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 on
roads
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 and cars do not stop to drive, they may get into many accidents,
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and most
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 of their lives may die because of it.
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, Russian analytics find the reasons for many crashes in tracks in their country, and the answer is that they do not spend
money
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 to repair the
roads
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.
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, why authorities should
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 spend funds to improve
structures
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the structures
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 of
roads
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 is that using
roads
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 to go from one place to another is the most popular form of transport in the world.
People
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 can start their travel at any time that they can, while by
railway
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the railway
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 system, they are depending on a time of schedule, which may lead to bad effects on some
people
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.
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, if a person feels bad and should go to the hospital, he cannot go by ambulance because the train does not stop and he should wait for the
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 railway station. In conclusion, the
government
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 should not stop spending
money
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 in other types of ways or spend more on
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 kinds rather than others. Because it may lead to many problems and
may be
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maybe
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 other kinds more preferable than which they may choose.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Carbon emissions
  • Mass transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Economic growth
  • Regional development
  • Initial investment
  • Feasibility
  • Flexibility
  • Rural areas
  • Integration
  • Sustainable
  • Efficiency
  • Infrastructure
  • Commuters
  • Public expenditure
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Long-term investment
  • Accessibility
  • Connectivity
  • Modal shift
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