Some people believe the benefits of tourism outweigh the problems it creates in a particular place. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In

this

concurrent world, it's undoubtedly true that

tourism

is increasing around the globe due to plethora

reasons

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but the main fact is due to

a low-cost flights

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is

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not only

on

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developed

countries

. Some

people

harbour a belief that the benefits of

tourism

cause detrimental

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issues

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at

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some

place

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while

while

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people

are

opposing

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to

this

notion. In

this

essay, I will elaborate on the positive and negative impact of

this

tread

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and

thus

lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriad reasons to agree with the meritorious side.

First

and Foremost is the increasing number of tourists around the world, boosting the country's economy. To probe more deeply, visitors are paying

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visits

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to

new

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place

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places

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,

pay

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tax fare tickets to the ticket and food industry, which

is

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indirectly benefits

to

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the

countries

.

For instance

,

Switzerland

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in Switzerland

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and Singapore

countries

is

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the major money source

depends

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on the

tourism

industries.

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, it's

clearly

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that

tourism

has undeniable benefits. What is full half for some may appear half empty to

the

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others

.

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So

people

, in general, tend to distinguish that

tourism

creating

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hazardous

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in some places which

has

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multifarious

side

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. Some

people

deem that the increasing number of visitors in the historical

place

, not able to maintain the places without damage by the local management.Another rationale which hauls me to proton is increasing

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number of products,

throwing

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plastic material in the ground. To cite an example Ladakh is known as its beautiful

place

, and

people

throw plastic material near the river causing issues for marine life.

Hence

it's apparent why many

people

are against

this

thread. In recapitulation, I reiterate that there

is

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strong innumerable factors supporting the development of the

countries

.

Instead

of restricting

tourism

, the government can find

a feasible solutions

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by enforcing the laws.

Consequently

, I firmly agree with the given statement.