You have been offered a place at a university and wish to find suitable accommodation. Write a letter to the accommodation officer including the following information: • the type of accommodation you wish to find • some details about yourself • Any special requirements you may have and any other relevant information.

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Dear Sir or Madam, Dear Sir/Madam, I am extremely thankful that you have offered accommodation in your institution. I am looking for three sharing with attached bathrooms for each room. I was told that you are providing both on and campus the latter costing between 500 and 1000 dollars per week. I would prefer to take the latter one as it is near to the university and takes 30 minutes to reach the college. If possible I would like to remain in the same place for the entire duration of my course, i.e. two academic years. I am enrolled on a post-graduate course in Information technology for two years. My student registration number is 11234rtf2. I am a state champion in basketball sports and an all-rounder in cricket. I don’t have any specific requirements, but I would prefer mid-day meals as I am on a low-calorie diet. I
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request you to share the accommodation with students of my age (I am 25) who are actively interested in sports. I do not mind whether the other students are on a similar course to me or not. I would be grateful if could send me two or three choices at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Vijay
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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