Humans tend to copy one another , especially in fashion,choice of clothes ,consumer goods .To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People
dress and purchase the same products like
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as
one
another in the
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society
. Personally , I don't believe this
is entirely true and the following paragraphs shall explain for
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this
standpoint.
Firstly
, the main reason why humans tend to behave the same way is because
they feel more secure and accepted in the community. Replace the word
that
One
real life
example Add a hyphen
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for
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of
this
is when famous celebrities like Selena Gomes launch post
on social media about what kind of makeup they put on ,Fix the agreement mistake
posts
people
all over the world including non fans
would be encouraged to buy the same makeup because they want to be like Selena and be liked by the Add a hyphen
non-fans
society
. This
is because if one
doesn't follow the day-to-day fashion styles and other trendsetters, one
is deemed to be labeled
as 'outdated' and Change the spelling
labelled
therefore
more likely to be judged and ignored by his peers and colleagues.
Allied to
the above , humans are quite competitive in nature. Change preposition
with
Therefore
some people
with high pay or have
generational wealth will have luxurious taste , Unnecessary verb
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will
buy expensive goods from Correct word choice
and will
high end
brands like Gucci, Chanel and Prada Add a hyphen
high-end
for example
. This
is because possession of such
goods will give them a sense of high status .Meanwhile
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,Meanwhile
the
others may simply settle down for something that Correct article usage
apply
fulfills
their basic requirements.
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fulfils
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there are some Add a comma
,However
people
who like to be perceived as 'unique'. Therefore
they may not follow social norms but believe in themselves and create and
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an
them
despite whatever Correct pronoun usage
themselves
society
thinks about them. To conclude, in my opinion
I do not entirely agree that Add the comma(s)
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people
copy one
another in everything because it really depends on one
's likes and dislikes and how they want to be seen by the
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society
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