You borrowed something from your friend, later it got damaged. Write letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • apology about the issue • tell how it got damaged • say you are going to fix this issue

#friend #apology

Dear Joy I am glad to know that you are selected for the international chess competition in London. how are your preparations for the championship? I wanted to say sorry to you for damaging the

book

that I borrowed from you

last

week. I know how important it is to you to use it

this

semester and the semester assessment will be conducted

month. I have completed taking notes from the text and I kept them on my study desk,

unfortunately

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,unfortunately

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the ink fell down on the

book

and it got damaged. The ink spread all over the

book

and it’s become unreadable. I have checked with the local bookshops for the

book

and it’s not available any were, but I purchased the

book

online and it will be delivered

this

weekend. If you are coming to Jennifer’s birthday party on Sunday, I will hand over the

book

. Best regards Mai

Submitted by ck.manshad on Wed Dec 28 2022

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

152 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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