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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #choices
These
days
,
as a result
 of progress in a significant number of areas
such
 as technology some people think we have more choices than in past
days
 which I agree with. But why is that?
To begin
 with, one of the most noticeable events that happened in the
last
 centuries was not allowing women to attend school or even work. They were forced to only do
house works
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 and take care of children.
Therefore
, it can be said that these
days
, the majority of females are allowed to study whatever they want and be equal to men which leads to more options and choices for them. As an illustration, in
middle
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east
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 countries, around 70 years ago schools and universities did not accept young girls and they were not allowed to drive cars.
Furthermore
,
due to
 the progress humanity has had in a lot of parts especially technology we are facing new majors for studying
such
 as biotechnology which is biology in a more professional way.
In addition
,
while
 adults in the past
days
 preferred to educate themselves, now teenagers are interested
to do
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 some jobs which they like and gain money from without even having a certificate.
Accordingly
, there is much new stuff
which
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 human beings
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 not expect will happen in the future.
For instance
, applications like TikTok and
YoTube
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YouTube
 are providing a place for people to gain a great deal of money without any certificate. In conclusion,
due to
 the reasons I mentioned above,
for example
, figuring out subjects and jobs I consider, nowadays, the public has more chances in different parts and it will have unimaginable choices in the future as well.
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task response
Address the question directly and provide a more balanced argument by considering both positive and negative aspects of having too many choices.
coherence cohesion
Improve logical structure by organizing your main points more coherently and developing a clear introduction and conclusion to your essay.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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