Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These
days
, Use synonyms
as a result
of progress in a significant number of areas Linking Words
such
as technology some people think we have more choices than in past Linking Words
days
which I agree with. But why is that?
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To begin
with, one of the most noticeable events that happened in the Linking Words
last
centuries was not allowing women to attend school or even work. They were forced to only do Linking Words
house works
and take care of children. Correct your spelling
housework
Therefore
, it can be said that these Linking Words
days
, the majority of females are allowed to study whatever they want and be equal to men which leads to more options and choices for them. As an illustration, in Use synonyms
middle
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Middle
east
countries, around 70 years ago schools and universities did not accept young girls and they were not allowed to drive cars.
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Eastern
Furthermore
, Linking Words
due to
the progress humanity has had in a lot of parts especially technology we are facing new majors for studying Linking Words
such
as biotechnology which is biology in a more professional way. Linking Words
In addition
, Linking Words
while
adults in the past Linking Words
days
preferred to educate themselves, now teenagers are interested Use synonyms
to do
some jobs which they like and gain money from without even having a certificate. Change preposition
in doing
Accordingly
, there is much new stuff Linking Words
which
human beings Correct word choice
that
did
not expect will happen in the future. Wrong verb form
do
For instance
, applications like TikTok and Linking Words
YoTube
are providing a place for people to gain a great deal of money without any certificate.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
YouTube
due to
the reasons I mentioned above, Linking Words
for example
, figuring out subjects and jobs I consider, nowadays, the public has more chances in different parts and it will have unimaginable choices in the future as well.Linking Words
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task response
Address the question directly and provide a more balanced argument by considering both positive and negative aspects of having too many choices.
coherence cohesion
Improve logical structure by organizing your main points more coherently and developing a clear introduction and conclusion to your essay.