Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Using a phone has mostly been a significant issue. It is suggested by some that using the telephone ought to be disallowed for

the

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students when they are at

school

, yet there are others who believe that students are free to use their

phones

during the

school

day.

In my

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opinion, I agree with that using

phones

which are by

children

should be permitted by their parents. One side of the argument says that

children

can not be allowed to use their

phones

during

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school

days which is not possible,

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especially

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. The modern library is the internet and telephones make it relatively simple to access the net.

For instance

, if a teacher gives a student an assignment which must be completed quickly, it is important that

this

student has to have access to the internet, specifically a phone.

Therefore

, in order to promote sociability, it may even be better for

children

to limit their interactions with their

phones

outside of

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school

days.

On the other hand

, some people believe that phone use should be permitted for

children

for their security because it is hard to predict who is good or wicked these days. It is possible to encounter danger everywhere.

For example

, according to the previous records,

children

were kidnapped by evil people because of that today's

children

can be more secure with features

such

as location on their

phones

.

Thus

,

children

especially pupils ought to be carrying their

phones

with them. In conclusion, while taking

children

's

phones

can be challenging for their homework, yet, giving permission for carrying their

phones

with them can be healthier and more trustworthy for

children

.