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Some people believe that the government should support the funds for the arts, while some other people suggest that money should be used for public health and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Arts
 is one of the most debated topics when we are talking about funding that
governments
 allocate. In my point of view, the government should superiorly use the money to improve public health because it is important for the
country
 for growing
further
.
Then
 if having some
budget
 left for
art
 could be a great idea. The following paragraph will discuss both sides. To date, the
arts
 have been decreasing in popularity for decades. Some
people
 suggest that
governments
 should give a
budget
 to improve the
arts
. The development of
art
 will lead to better development of national tourism. Chinese
art
 has a profound cultural heritage. Calligraphy, music, paper-cutting, painting and opera have all evolved over thousands of years.
Art
 with a precious five-thousand-years history of the ancient
country
also
 attracts more and more world tourists. Even though other
people
 advise those opinions, a group of
people
 believes that
governments
 are supposed to contribute money to population healthcare. In order to develop the
country
, healthcare is one of the important factors that impact the rest of the
country
.
For instance
, during infectious diseases, the government should allow money on medicine and vaccination to protect
people
 from crucial viruses because if a population is healthy everything will run smoothly.
Thus
,
governments
 should give healthcare problems a priority rather than focus on the
arts
, which could not help anyone in
this
 situation. In conclusion,
governments
 should
first
 use the
budget
 to take care of the population in the
country
.
Then
 if have a spare
budget
, supporting the
arts
 field could be a good decision.
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