Some people believe that it is better to live and work in a vertical city with multiple tall buildings, as compared to a horizontal city with fewer tall buildings. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is a bitter truth that with industrialization and the resultant progress of the human race, the flora and fauna of the planet have been adversely influenced. lot of countries,
This
has risen debate where some are quite pessimistic and believe that it is better to live in skyscrapers; whereas a few others deny this
and say that city
with more Fix the agreement mistake
cities
townhouse
and fewer apartments are better. Both Fix the agreement mistake
townhouses
the
views and my opinion are discussed Change the word
my
further
.
Considering the former view, many people think pessimistically mainly because nature is preserved. That is
, fewer trees are cut in order to build new houses which helps in preventing deforestation and soil erosion. Also
, the animals and plant won't lose their natural habitat. Furthermore
, individuals need to travel less which leads to less pollution. Additionally
, human
population has increased rapidly in Add an article
the human
last
century. It is impossible to have Correct article usage
the last
seperate
a house for each individual Correct your spelling
separate
otherwise
there will be no space left for animal
and plants.
Fix the agreement mistake
animals
On the contrary
, discussing the views of those who believe living
in Change preposition
in living
Add an article
a townhouse
townhouse
than apartments, the most vital issue is the quality of life is decreased and Fix the agreement mistake
townhouses
privacy
of an individual is compromised. Correct article usage
the privacy
For example
, a person need
a private gym and swimming which is not possible in apartments. Change the verb form
needs
Moreover
, parking issue is the
another reason why an individual Remove the article
apply
prefer
living in a townhouse. Change the verb form
prefers
For instance
, a family living in two bedroom apartment can only get two parking slot, while the family have three vehicles.
To give my opinion and to conclude, I would certainly voice that it is better to leave in a tall building and preserve the environment. This
can be done by developing cities with more skyscrapers, which I believeChange the article
a
government
and people have begun to do.Fix the agreement mistake
governments
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