Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

There is a contention between people who consider that professionals must work in the
country
where they gain education to become
such
while others share the opinion of them being free to choose in which
country
to work
in
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.
This
essay will provide
the
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examples and reasons why I believe that doctors, engineers and others are free to choose
the
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place of
own
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their own
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job-settlement
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.
First
of all, all of us are born equal.
For instance
,if I would become a well-known doctor in my hometown,
i
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would be grateful for the knowledge they had given.
However
, if the salary would not suit my pocket, I would move to a
country
where the authorities would appreciate my skills in the right way.
That is
why
i
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am happy to
born
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equal and be protected by legislative unions.
Secondly
, nobody is tied to the motherland. Government can not take you as an advance for the
country
and keep you in poor conditions where there are no opportunities to succeed in a career ladder. As an example,
i
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were
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great
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singer, but I only could participate in a
little
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competitions. There was no chance for me to grow due to the bribery in my
country
when
i
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decided to move and attain my dreams in Europe.
That is
why everyone can choose
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better
country
for themselves.
As
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a
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conclusion, the reason why professionals
as
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doctors and engineers can pick the
country
where to work
in
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is that everybody is born with the right and dignity to select the best option.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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