Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there only small differences between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I barely agree. In my opinion, increasing the income of poor
people
could be a method to create a better world, but not the best way because
this
method could bring both positive and negative effects to society. I am going to write about both the merits and the drawbacks in
this
essay. Letting poor residents become rich could be beneficial for the country. As poor individuals have a similar salary to rich
people
, they are able to have a better-quality life.
For example
,
people
having poor financial conditions are able to buy a bigger house to live in, afford their utilities or even have good healthcare.
Besides
, families having worse economic conditions could support their children to access better education.
However
, narrowing the gap between the rich and the poor communities could
also
result in some side effects.
For instance
, if an authority subsidizes poor
people
with a good amount of money, it would lead to a big economic issue - inflation. It will influence all
people
in the whole region, no matter the rich or the poor.
Besides
, it will damage the economy of other nations as well.
In addition
, government funding may cause recipients not to like to work again rather than enjoy their life, as it is human nature. In conclusion, I believe making everyone have similar income only has a limited effect on a happier society. The negative result in the nation would overwhelm the positive influence on the poor public, so the government need to implement other policies to produce a more satisfied community.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • income inequality
  • distribution of wealth
  • social cohesion
  • social unrest
  • crime rates
  • economic equality
  • overall well-being
  • health outcomes
  • education outcomes
  • motivation
  • innovation
  • equal opportunities
  • wealth redistribution
  • economic growth
  • productivity
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