Nowadays more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do you think the adventages of this trend for individuals overweigh its disadventages for the environment?

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In the modern era , everyone enjoys their life due to the
cars
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and they don`t have any problem with them . Some
masses
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believe the uses of their own
cars
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have more advantages as compared to disadvantages of nature , whereas others think it has both the same advantages and disadvantages. I totally agree with the latter statement and will discuss it in the upcoming paragraphs .
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, with the advantages of
the
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cars
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.
First
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and
the
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foremost reason is
that
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that car
those cars
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cars
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save our
time
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in any kind of
emergencies
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emergency
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such
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as if anybody has a serious illness
in
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at
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the
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home so we don`t have to worry about an
abulance
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ambulance
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when it will come and ill
masses
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go
hospital
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because individuals have
cars
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so they can take care about
time
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.
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, if peoples start the
uses
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of the public transport system
then
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they might be late for their jobs because
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have so many stops and sometimes
buses
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are
full
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a full
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rush of
masses
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as well as
buses
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don't have
fix
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time
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in
the
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2010 a survey was conducted by UNO which indicating about the late issues due to so many stops of
buses
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and folk
had
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been suspended from their jobs .
On the other hand
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, if peoples start using their own
vehical
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vehicle
then
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the level of CO2 will be inclined and one day there is no life on the earth because human beings are cutting down
billion
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billions
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of trees every year so how they can control the level of CO2 and due to overuse of
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technology
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they must lose their saving as well .
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, if
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masses
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the masses
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do not stop the regular use of
cars
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then
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one day they will finish
fuel
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and it will be
a
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time
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individual become feel regretful about the overuses of technicals.
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, in the year ,2015
a
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news was a trending article about consume of
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and its result was 30 %
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fuel
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of fuel
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people lost
from
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on
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the earth . In conclusion , if
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masses
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the masses
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reduce the use of
cars
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then
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it is possible to overcome the
issues
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issue
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of losing
fuel
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and it is the batter way to use
fuel
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in the long term as well as if the
goverment
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government
fixes
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time
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the time
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for public busses and they start new busses
then
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it is the one way to decline in uses of personal
vechcials
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technicals
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventages
  • disadventages
  • trend
  • individuals
  • overweigh
  • environment
  • convenience
  • flexibility
  • transportation
  • time-saving
  • efficient
  • commuting
  • independence
  • freedom
  • travel
  • ownership
  • status
  • employment opportunities
  • automobile industry
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • climate change
  • traffic congestion
  • loss of green spaces
  • wildlife habitats
  • dependence
  • fossil fuels
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