With the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on environment? What can be done to solve the problem?

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It does create huge problems with CO2 emission as well as problems concerned with noise . These can be solved by producing eco-friendly planes and building them in less populated areas. A large number of people desire to see the places of interest,that's why, they are travelling around the world by plane,which is the quickest way to travel.

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, these aerial transports produce a large

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of exhaust fumes

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because virtually all of them require petrol to move.

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, the more flights,the more nature suffers from CO2 and the more petrol is wasted.

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,in most cases, airports are located near dense-populated places,especially in the cities, and

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leads to noise pollution in the local areas.

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, Urgench International Airport is situated just in Central Street,

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it causes trouble not only for people living there but

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the working ones. These issues can be tackled in 2 main ways .

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, environmentally friendly planes should be produced more,which means theyū ought to work on solar panels. In

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and exhaust fumes would be emitted less.

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, the airports should be constructed in less populated areas

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as in the suburbs or in the deserts. To conclude , the large requirement for flights by hoarders of tourists causes disasters

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as noise pollution and emitting gases into the eco-system and they can be solved by using eco-friendly planes and building Airports in the deserts or suburbs.