Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include: where you live what the problem is what he should do

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to my apartment which belongs to you. I am a tenant at the Collingwood housing scheme which belongs to you and stayed for over one year. Previously, I

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in his home regularly.

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, I heard noise from his home and difficult to sleep overnight. Because these days I have to wake up in the early morning due to attend

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me. I several times advised him not to make noise but till now he do not tack action. Due to that fact, I would like to suggest you to come you are property and advise him regarding my matter.

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any action against them I will make a complaint against them to the police. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Asanka.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

170 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

complaint
tenant
landlord
block of flats
disturbance
noise pollution
soundproofing
regulations
inconvenience
reside
address
issue
resolve
assurance
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