Some people argued that history is of little or no use. Others believe that studying history give many benefits. Discuss those views and give your own opinion?
There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over whether
history
has been applicable or not. While some claim that it gives us tremendous merits, the opposite makes a statement that it is no longer useful for our modenizing
era. The latter is valid to some extent, meanwhile, I consider myself a proponent of the former.
Without a shadow of a Correct your spelling
modernizing
doubt
Add a comma
,doubt
history
plays a significant role in today's society. In addition
, learning history
is not only an effective tactic for us to connect to our origin
but it Fix the agreement mistake
origins
also
recalls the ancestor's spiritual action
of how they Fix the agreement mistake
actions
fight
for our own good. Wrong verb form
fought
For instance
, Uncle Ho, who is the founder of Socialist
Republic of Vietnam, is cited as a decent ideal for every generation to follow Correct article usage
the Socialist
his
footsteps. Change preposition
in his
Due to the
Change preposition
The
way
he found Vietnamese "Independence, Liberty and Happiness", Add a comma
,way
it
showed us how an individual's patriotism Correct pronoun usage
apply
save
a country from war and poverty. Those actions have stimulated youngsters in order to pursue the pioneers' way and help the nation become more and more peaceful. Correct subject-verb agreement
saves
Hence
, absorbing history
can bring great effectiveness.
While the advantages of learning history
are widely acknowledged, the counterpart of it which is ''history
may be inapplicable to some extent'' has also
been agreed by numerous people. As for women in the past, they experienced an exacerbated prejudice. But now the time has changed, men
and women have the same status. Correct word choice
and men
For example
, Nguyen Thi Kim Ngan, who is the Pre-Chairman of the National Assembly of Vietnam, is an ideal of a successful woman. Therefore
, prejudice is no longer appropriate in society so history
is not valid now.
To conclude, studying history
brings us tremendous benefits, but we need to comprehend it thoroughly so as to know whether it is useful or not.Submitted by hominhtrang995 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite