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DOGS ARE ONE OF THE MOST POPULAR PETS IN THE WORLD, YET MANY WOULD SAY IT IS INAPPROPRIATE TO HAVE THEM IN BUILT UP INNER CITY AREAS. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE

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Dogs
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 are perhaps the most well-known animal which humans pet around the world and
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people
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 think it is not suitable to have them in the centre of the
city
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. In my point of view, there are animal laws that control whether home animals are there or not so that it is not a headache for
people
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 to have
dogs
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 in the urban area of the
city
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.
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 of all, we are not the only living organism on earth means there should be a place for animals to live and exist.
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, if we are living in the centre of the
city
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 it must be accessible for our pets to be here too since their owners pay attention to their cute little brothers.
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 of all, without
dogs
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, our
city
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 might turn into dull surroundings. To clarify,
dogs
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 are pets which bring ecstasy to someone's life and without them, it might be a really rough time adjusting to normal life for some
people
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.
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,
dogs
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 are as intelligent as we expect them to be. To simplify, research by the Red Cross has shown that 30% of blind or disabled
people
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 who live in urban areas are getting assistance from trained
dogs
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 which illustrates
dogs
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 are the closest friends to some human beings. What is more , some of our furry friends tend to act as a housekeeper at some times.
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, the german shepherd can be trained as a nanny that allows his/her owner to cook or do any other activities for a moment, according to a study by the University of Edinburgh.
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, neighbours of pet owners may suffer from the loud noise of barking. Especially when it comes to huskies, which are overdramatic
dogs
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 that tend to produce a lot of noise that may
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 them to worry their owners.
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, some individuals are allergic to
dogs
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' fur. To think of it it might sound like nothing but some deeper phase of allergies may result in the death of a person. Just touching or breathing their fur, may cause a serious problem that leads to struggle. To conclude, even though some
people
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 are not used to cooperating with
dogs
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 and may hate them, there is still the rest who adores petting a dog. If we learn to manage their noise and purify their fur in order to save those from allergies, it will not be trouble for them to keep living with
dogs
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. I personally believe that only with
dogs
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 are our lives a bit more joyful.

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