Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays
noise
pollution is in the news and especially in young communities like high volume. In public many peoples demand the government discipline
noise
pollution and whereas many
people
think that they can make
noise
as they want. There should be rules and regulations to control
noise
so, that silence will not be broken in
society
but allowed to
people
make
noise
as they want but up to certain decimals. I shall explain both views in
this
essay. To Commence with, In ,civilization everyone has a right to live peacefully. Nowadays the young generation likes to listen to music at a high volume on the other side elder
people
don't like that because they like slow music and
also
it will disturb work. Some controls over the
noise
will help to maintain silence in the nation so, that folk can focus on work and study as well as older
people
live very well
furthermore
after sunset louder
noise
can harmful to birds, animals and other human beings. Sometimes machine makes too much
noise
and damages the earning capacity of worker and they
also
it will create choices in
society
. In recent times Mumbai police caught a biker gang that makes too much
noise
by using a special silencer who makes a loud
noise
.
On the other hand
, Everyone has a right to do what they want, no one can stop them unless it is unlawful. In ,
society
anyone can make
noise
as they want but they have to do it at the limit which is specified by the government sometimes it depends on you, how much you care for
society
it's all about you. If there is no
such
option to control the
noise
like some machine makes a huge sound but it is part of the production process. In the industrial ,areas there are so many factors are there which make too much
noise
and there is no other option to control over there at that time rule might make a hurdle in the industry's growth. In conclusion, I think there should require some strict rules and regulations for the
noise
of a peaceful
society
and give them a little bit of relaxation for the youth's enjoyment and industry growth.
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