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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

#countries #people #history #house #research
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Nowadays,
people
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 like to find out the
history
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 of the
place
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 they live in. It is because they want to know what happened in the past.
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, it depends on the age of the apartment or
house
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 they live in.   These days
people
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 consider the
history
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 of the
place
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 they live, which helps to increase their knowledge of the past.
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, these days they are keeping track of the
history
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 of the places they live because of the nature of the
house
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.
This
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 helps them build a better living environment for themselves. It is extremely beneficial for determining a
house
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's
history
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 or age to talk to
people
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 who have knowledge of
history
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 and materials. These
people
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 can perform experiments on the materials in the
house
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.
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,
people
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 can study
this
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 field at university or college, and after graduating, they can search for work opportunities in these fields.
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, these ways are different from other ways because they are supposed to like
history
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 about everything, not just about the architecture of the
house
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 . Me , historical facts about my
house
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 are not interesting to me because houses in my country are destroyed after 10 years, and
people
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 make new houses, and I think finding the
history
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 of a
place
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 goes against the grain. ,
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 some places have interesting histories because the buildings are very old.
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, my aunt's
house
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 in Esfahan was built during the time of Aga Khan and Agh Khan, one of the biggest men in Esfahan in the past. Her
house
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 has beautiful stories about the
people
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 who lived there. In conclusion, finding the
history
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 of a building,
house
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, or other
place
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 depends on the type of that
place
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 and the age of that
place
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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