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Today, may people have little knowledge about the importance of natural world. What are the reasons for this? How can we solve this problem?

#people #importance #world
The natural
world
 plays a critical part in human being's life ,but nowadays folks forget to enhance our beautiful
environment
 to clean and green it,they have very small knowledge of the natural
world
. In
this
 essay.I will discuss the reasons why it happened and give a better solution.
Firstly
, in
this
 hectic ,schedule people do not go through environmental enhancement. Individuals usually focus on their workspace .
In addition
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internet there are many little details. Because the media do not cover nature conditions due to low views, people aren't going through and take it seriously that the
environment
 is the only beneficial way to stay long and active .
Secondly
, it is less priority and awareness among
young
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 generation . Meanwhile in the education
system
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 government have to add natural
world
 aspects so children are aware
from
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 their childhood
manage
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 their society .
For example
 in
india
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 around 20
percent
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 equivalent of
world
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the world
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 population .
Thirdly
 media overwhelmed the advertisement towards natural protection . Every lock has
key
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, To
solute
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this
 problem government have to take strict action
among
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the
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society create awareness to organise camps to provide significant information for individual, so they know
who
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 much
natural
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the natural
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environment
 is important to them and take it seriously.
Moreover
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 media have to broadcast natural habitat advertisements so more and more masses work together for the betterment of
nation
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 .
Further
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more
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authority
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have
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 to provide knowledge to children in education
syllabus
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 so they learn the importance
.
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 In conclusion,
i
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 assert that many programs will be organised to salute
this
 problem ,
beacuse
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because
their
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 is less priority and awareness about
environment
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the environment
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. publishing and government have a critical hand in
this
 to make
great
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 chance in it .
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