Do you believe that self-driving cars will become common in the near future? Why or why not? Support your answer with reasons and expamles from your own knowledge or experience.

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NOWADAYS, THERE

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ARE

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A LOT OF PROJECTS IN MANUFACTURING

CARS

THAT CAN

DRIVE

ITSELF

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THEMSELVES

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. I STRONGLY AGREE THAT THE STREETS WILL BE FULL OF

SUCH

DEVELOPMENT IN THE

FEW YEARS. IN

THIS

ESSAY I WILL EXPLAIN THE REASONS FOR MY OPINION.

FIRSTLY

, MANY COMPANIES AND BUSINESSES ARE INVESTING IN

SUCH

PROMISING

PROJECT

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PROJECTS

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. ONE REASON IS THAT FULLY AUTOMATED VEHICLES ARE EQUIPPED WITH ADVANCED TECHNOLOGY THAT CAN CONTROL THE

CAR

MORE EFFICIENTLY AND ACCURATELY COMPARED TO HUMANS.

AS A RESULT

, THERE WILL BE A

LESS

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FEWER

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ACCIDENTS ON THE ROAD.

MOREOVER

, IT CAN TAKE THE PASSENGER THROUGH

FAST

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A FAST

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ROUTE

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ROUTES

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AND AVOID EXPECTED TRAFFIC

JAM

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JAMS

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OR IF THERE IS ROAD CONSTRUCTION. ANOTHER REASON

ENCOURAGING

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FOR ENCOURAGING

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THE MANUFACTURE OF SELF-DRIVING

CARS

IS THAT

PEOPLE

WILL BE ABLE TO DO OTHER THINGS WHILE THE

CAR

DRIVE

BY ITSELF.

FOR EXAMPLE

, A PERSON CAN WRITE EMAILS WHILE THE

CAR

DRIVING TO THE ASSIGNED DESTINATION.

FURTHERMORE

, BEFORE WORKING ON

THIS

PROJECT IT WAS DIFFICULT FOR DISABLED INDIVIDUALS OR OLD

PEOPLE

DRIVE

THEIR OWN

CAR

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CARS

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HOWEVER

, SELF-DRIVING

CARS

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ARE

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A GREAT OPTION FOR

THIS

GROUP OF

PEOPLE

WHO CAN NOT REACT AS

QUICK

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QUICKLY

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AS THE SELF-DRIVING

CAR

. IN A NUTSHELL, I BELIEVE MORE FULLY AUTOMATED

CARS

ARE COMING TO THE STREETS.

ALTHOUGH

IT LOOKS FAR FROM REALITY TO SEE

CARS

DRIVE

ITSELF

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THEMSELVES

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BUT

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apply

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IF HAPPENED THERE WILL BE A LOT OF BENEFITS.

SUCH

AS DECREASING

NUMBER

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THE NUMBER

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OF ACCIDENTS AND

ALLOW

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ALLOWING

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PEOPLE

TO TAKE ADVANTAGE OF FREE TIME WHILE

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THEIR WAY TO

DESTINATION

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THEIR DESTINATION

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ALSO

PEOPLE

WITH ILLNESSES OR

AGED

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AGE

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GROUP

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GROUPS

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WHO ARE NOT

CANDIDATE

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CANDIDATES

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TO BE DRIVERS, CAN BENEFIT FROM

THIS

DEVELOPMENT.

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Linking words for giving examples:

for example
for instance
to illustrate this
to give a clear example
such as
namely
to illustrate
take, for example

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

268 words

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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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