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Do you believe that self-driving cars will become common in the near future? Why or why not? Support your answer with reasons and expamles from your own knowledge or experience.

#cars #future #support #expamles
NOWADAYS, THERE
IS
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ARE
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 A LOT OF PROJECTS IN MANUFACTURING
CARS
 THAT CAN
DRIVE
 BY
ITSELF
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THEMSELVES
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. I STRONGLY AGREE THAT THE STREETS WILL BE FULL OF
SUCH
 DEVELOPMENT IN THE
NEXT
 FEW YEARS. IN
THIS
 ESSAY I WILL EXPLAIN THE REASONS FOR MY OPINION.
FIRSTLY
, MANY COMPANIES AND BUSINESSES ARE INVESTING IN
SUCH
 PROMISING
PROJECT
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PROJECTS
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. ONE REASON IS THAT FULLY AUTOMATED VEHICLES ARE EQUIPPED WITH ADVANCED TECHNOLOGY THAT CAN CONTROL THE
CAR
 MORE EFFICIENTLY AND ACCURATELY COMPARED TO HUMANS.
AS A RESULT
, THERE WILL BE A
LESS
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FEWER
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 ACCIDENTS ON THE ROAD.
MOREOVER
, IT CAN TAKE THE PASSENGER THROUGH
FAST
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A FAST
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ROUTE
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ROUTES
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 AND AVOID EXPECTED TRAFFIC
JAM
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JAMS
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 OR IF THERE IS ROAD CONSTRUCTION. ANOTHER REASON
ENCOURAGING
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FOR ENCOURAGING
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 THE MANUFACTURE OF SELF-DRIVING
CARS
 IS THAT
PEOPLE
 WILL BE ABLE TO DO OTHER THINGS WHILE THE
CAR
DRIVE
 BY ITSELF.
FOR EXAMPLE
 , A PERSON CAN WRITE EMAILS WHILE THE
CAR
 DRIVING TO THE ASSIGNED DESTINATION.
FURTHERMORE
, BEFORE WORKING ON
THIS
 PROJECT IT WAS DIFFICULT FOR DISABLED INDIVIDUALS OR OLD
PEOPLE
 TO
DRIVE
 THEIR OWN
CAR
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CARS
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.
HOWEVER
, SELF-DRIVING
CARS
IS
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ARE
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 A GREAT OPTION FOR
THIS
 GROUP OF
PEOPLE
 WHO CAN NOT REACT AS
QUICK
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QUICKLY
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 AS THE SELF-DRIVING
CAR
. IN A NUTSHELL, I BELIEVE MORE FULLY AUTOMATED
CARS
 ARE COMING TO THE STREETS.
ALTHOUGH
 IT LOOKS FAR FROM REALITY TO SEE
CARS
DRIVE
 BY
ITSELF
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THEMSELVES
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,
BUT
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apply
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IF HAPPENED THERE WILL BE A LOT OF BENEFITS.
SUCH
 AS DECREASING
NUMBER
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THE NUMBER
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 OF ACCIDENTS AND
ALLOW
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ALLOWING
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PEOPLE
 TO TAKE ADVANTAGE OF FREE TIME WHILE
IN
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ON
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 THEIR WAY TO
DESTINATION
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THEIR DESTINATION
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.
ALSO
,
PEOPLE
 WITH ILLNESSES OR
AGED
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AGE
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GROUP
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GROUPS
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 WHO ARE NOT
CANDIDATE
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CANDIDATES
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 TO BE DRIVERS, CAN BENEFIT FROM
THIS
 DEVELOPMENT.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomous vehicles
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • machine learning
  • innovations
  • technological revolution
  • smart infrastructure
  • regulatory framework
  • safety protocols
  • mass adoption
  • user trust
  • green technology
  • carbon footprint
  • disruptive technology
  • labor displacement
  • economic efficiency
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