Many young people today leave school with a negative attitude towards learning. What is the reason, and what can be done to encourage a positive attitude to learning?

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It is known that a number of adolescents have graduated from school with
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approach
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learning. I believe that there are some reasons which cause
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and
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sort of solutions.
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with, hating learning new topics which have been
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at schools has influenced educational systems which have been carried out in the country.
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, some states which are not able
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execute
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teaching methods can not grow up new generation
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, the main issue
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negative behaviours to get
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new things related to
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the system
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, lecturer quality is the other
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which leads to mentioned
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. In fact, no one
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that teachers have
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effect on the students and if they do not obtain
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adequate
specialities,
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would be hard to teach the young how they can enjoy
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learning.
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, it seems to me that there are two main reasons to cause
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which
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cited above.
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, there
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two main solutions to resolve the
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of all, the essential way to overcome
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difficulty
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is
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the
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apply
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education
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by using
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methods. To demonstrate, Finland which the country fulfils the effective teaching
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techniques
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has succeeded to reach a
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level for pleasuring
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education
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point of
views
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of the students.
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of all, ministries of
education
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can find a solution to deal with
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issue by changing the curriculums of faculties of
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which have grown up
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a tutor
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for schools.
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, educating the lecturers who have
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the children should be considered a
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cruel
crucial
step to handle cited
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.
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, thanks to mentioned solutions can
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nagative
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negative
attitudes about learning. To sum up,
although
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educational
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the educational
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system and behaviours of teachers cause the hating to
learn
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learning
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new topics
problem
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, regulating the educational methods and revising the
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of lecturers might be
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the solution
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solution
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to handle the
difficulty
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