It is beneficail for people to spend some time living ia a country where they must speak a foreing language , Do you agree or disagree?

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era, leaving in a rustic that has applied foreign language daily is

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a positive way for some people to reach their dream. I completely agree with

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statement, because there are benefits

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as exercising accent skills and upgrading own values. it is true that having competence in foreign languages

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a very important thing today. a global expression

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is in the highest demand today in any sector, including the education sector.

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, in Indonesia every single day the community just

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local wording when communicating. some student feels

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situation is a barrier for those who

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upgrade their value. cause of

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situation, they are going to study abroad to increase their level skill of

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, they can expand their relationship with other friends from other countries.

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, a foreign accent is adding value for some people who want to apply for a job in a giant company with a big salary. by leaving in a foreign province that was applying

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daily, they have a big chance of joining the club.

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, some student who has finished their degree abroad, and

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come back to Indonesia there will get their dream job faster.

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, their work in Indonesia, their

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skills can use to communicate with foreign clients. in a nutshell, living in a big rustic where has used

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in daily activities can give a big impact on the individual. especially for those who want to level up their

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skill to upgrade their value and get their dream in the future.

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It is beneficail for people to spend some time living ia a country where they must speak a foreing language , Do you agree or disagree?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Task 2 Many people claim that ordering food is a better option than preparing it themselves. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labour. Therefore, working hours should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Public transport is essential but problematic. Describe some of problems connected to public transport and suggest some solution

In many countries, people think owning a home is more important than renting one. Why is this the case? Do you think it’s a positive or negative situation?