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The movement of people from agricultural areas to big cities caused problems im both palces. In your oponion, what is the reason for this problem? How can it be solved?

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Nowadays, many
people
 immigrate to big
cities
 from rural areas because they are looking for better working and living conditions.
This
 situation causes too many problems for both
cities
 and rural. I think if the government improves the whole country's economy,
people
 don'
t
 move to somewhere where they do not belong in.
First
 of all, many
people
 immigrate because they couldn'
t
 get enough money in their hometown so, they are looking for jobs that have a higher salary. In the beginning,
people
 dream about high-level life standards but the truth is, city life is more expensive than it used to be.
Moreover
, agriculture is really important to the country's economy. Unless agricultural jobs' salaries are getting higher,
people
 don'
t
 continue. The government should provide
people
 who are working on agricultural jobs so, production and those
people
's incomes would become better. Plus, there is a big difference between metropole and agricultural areas lifestyles. When a person moves to metropoles, it would take much time to get used to. During
this
 time,
this
 person does not fit there and might be difficult for him/her and the
people
 around. Authorities should define the
cities
' population limits and
people
 mustn'
t
 be allowed to enter the
cities
 without permission. Most
cities
 are overcrowded
however
,
people
 still moving there.
Also
, after they moved, they should learn about basic city rules because
otherwise
, they would be an issue to others. To sum up, many
people
 who live in rural areas are dreaming about a better life and they are moving to
cities
 for earning a higher salary
however
,
this
 situation causes many problems for many
people
. These problems should be solved by the governments because they are chosen for
this
.
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