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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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People believe that the
use
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computer
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computers
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is bring
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 more
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 than the merit. Mostly
this
 kind of opinion
show
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 up because the influence of
computer
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 is huge for the user that
particullary
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particularly
particular
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limit
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 of
use
. I totally agree with the statement.
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The computer
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Computer
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 can provide
anykind
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any kind
 of information that society needed from any level, which
it
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can
caused
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 addiction syndrome. One
of
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the
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example
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, it can
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 in
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a student
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student
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 who
prefer
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find
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 to explore in a book, it can bring
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a negatife
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negative
 effect by
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 to get
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answer
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. In
other
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case
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 it can be any kind of work that
create
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 by someone easily
to
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be plagiarism by
other
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the
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protect
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 system.
For instance
, a bunch of science
journale
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journal
journals
 can be easily cracked by
computer
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the computer
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user
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users
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.
Therefore
, the
use
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computer
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 is
resistance
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 in some
of
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the case
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case
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. To
sump
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this
 discussion, I
am strongly agree
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 that
computer
 has
low
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 positive influence.
Hence
 the user can get the
disadvantege
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disadvantage
 of that.
In
addition
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 it is better
of
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 people who
use
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a computer
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computer
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computers
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 with a limit and
reminder
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, so they can prevent
of
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the
addicted
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 by using
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the computer
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computer
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.
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