A friend of yours has always admired your car. You have now decided to sell it. Write a letter to your friend to ask if he is interested in buying your car. In your letter, -explain why you are selling the car - Describe the good points and any bad points about your car - suggest the friend visits you to see and drive your car

#friend #car #-explain #points #visits #drive

Dear Raja, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to let you know that, I have decided to sell my

car

and as I know, you always admired my

car

from the time it was bought. As mentioned to you in our previous phone conversations about a new job offer in California which is almost 3000 miles from Boston. Driving it that far would make no sense, and

also

the cost of transporting it is very expensive which is the reason for selling it. The

car

is in a good condition with just 15000 miles driven and with all other parts in their place. The only drawback of it is a minor scratch on the passenger door which happened while parking in the garage at my place. I am offering it a good deal for 35000k USD and it would be great if you can visit me to see and drive your

car

. In that ,way we can

also

catch up some good time. I will be looking forward to

meet

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hear from you soon. Best regards, Varsha.

Submitted by varshar1612 on Sun Jan 15 2023

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

182 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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