In many countries plastic bags are main source of rubbish causing pollution in oceans and on land therefore they should be banned . To what extent do you agree or disagree
Use
of plastics Correct article usage
The use
have
become a major threat to the Change the verb form
has
enviorment
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environment
specially
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especially
oceans
and lands
. For years plastic
bags
are been widely used in many forms and use
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the use
plastic
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of plastic
bags
has
become the biggest threat to the Correct subject-verb agreement
have
oceans
and lands
. It is a well established
fact Add a hyphen
well-established
where
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that
plastic
bags
are one of the major problem
causing Fix the agreement mistake
problems
artifacts
. Analysing the easy access to Change the spelling
artefacts
use
of Add an article
the use
plastic
bags
and dumping these has become a
easy and low cost rather recycling will prove Change the article
an
this
.
Firstly
, plastics
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plastic
bags
are very cheap and the availability of these bags
are
very common. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Further
, human
are very comfortable Fix the agreement mistake
humans
in
using Change preposition
apply
plasitc
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plastic
bags
for the
daily Correct article usage
apply
use
such
as,
grocery Remove the comma
apply
shoping
, food packaging and many more due to Correct your spelling
shopping
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their convinient
convinient
, easy access and durability. Sadly, Correct your spelling
convenient
these
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this
creates
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create
and
intention of Correct your spelling
an
exesive
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excessive
use
as well as using one time which accumilates
into a huge amount of waste. Correct your spelling
accumulates
accumulated
Therefore
, this
make
it clear that a Change the verb form
makes
considerbale
percentage of garbageCorrect your spelling
considerable
a
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in a
countires
garbage consist of Correct your spelling
countries
plastic
bags
.
Seocndly
, many Correct your spelling
Secondly
Second
countires
are recycling garbage Correct your spelling
countries
such
as glass, metal, cardboard
due to the Correct word choice
and cardboard
recycle
value. Replace the word
recycling
However
, plastic
bags
does
not have any Change the verb form
do
recycle
value and it is considered that Replace the word
recycling
manufaturing
new Correct your spelling
manufacturing
bags
are much more
cheaper than recycling. Change the word
apply
Unfortunetly
, Correct your spelling
Unfortunately
this
leads into
dumping Change preposition
to
palsitc
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plastic
bags
in landfills and eventually this
get in to
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into
oceans
as well. This
confirms that plasitc
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plastic
bags
has
become a major Change the verb form
have
polution
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pollution
treat
to Correct your spelling
threat
oceans
and lands
.
In summary
it is evident that easy accessibility of Add a comma
,summary
plasitc
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plastic
bags
and lack of intention on recycling has become a
fundamental factor that Correct article usage
apply
oceans
and lands
are
getting polluted due to Unnecessary verb
apply
plastic
bags
. Therefore
it is clear that countires
should ban the Correct your spelling
countries
use
of plastic
bags
and look for alternatives. After a through
analysis of the above factors, it is predicted that Correct your spelling
thorough
use
of Correct article usage
the use
plastic
bags
will be a grater
threat to the Correct your spelling
greater
oceans
and lands
, it is required for countires
to ban the Correct your spelling
countries
use
of plastic
bags
and introduce substitute products to the citizens since plastic
bags
has been a part of their life for decades.Submitted by shazmin.marikar on
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