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You are preparing an event in the countryside . Write a letter to your friend and ask for help with the arrangements . In your letter , • Describe the event • Mention what arrangements have already been done • Say how

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Dear Rahul, Hope you're doing well. I am writing
this
 letter to let you know that I am preparing for an
event
 in the rural area and I might need your favour for one of
an
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 important tasks. You'll be happy to hear that I'll organize a free eyesight checkup
event
 in the village
for
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next
 week . As you already know that many elder people
suffers
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 a lot from low vision issues in the countryside area so, I will like to assist them as much as I can . Currently, I am training my medical team for
this
 social welfare task. Overall ,we are ten members in a group. I arranged all the vision instruments as well as
took
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a
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permission from the village authorities for the organization of
this
 work.
In addition
 to
this
, I reserved a public hall to provide better medical
aids
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to rural residents . As you are already living in
this
 village so , I believe that you might have many contacts with many people in your surroundings . Can you help me to inform the rural public about
this
 free eye checkup
event
 ?
Also
, I will give you pamphlets that I prepared as an advert
to
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this
event
 . For
this
 ,you have to just visit everyone’s home and give these adverts to them . I will see you soon . Pay regards to my uncle and aunt . Your friend, Andrew.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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