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the best way to reduce crime amongst young people is to teach parents good parenting skill. Do you agree or disargee ?

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Nowadays, young
people
 commit a lot of crimes than
last
 two decades. Maybe the underlying reason is the wrong upbringing. Mainly
this
 mistake belongs to some
parents
.
This
 essay agrees that
parents
 must learn to raise their
children
 differently.
Firstly
,
this
 essay will discuss how
this
method
 can help to reduce crime among young
people
, and
secondly
, what will be the results in society. On the one hand, teaching
parents
 good parenthood talents can change the world society. Many
parents
 prohibit their
children
 from regular activities
such
 as a walk outside with them, drawing, playing games with them, and all
children
's joys. Modern
parents
 prefer to force their
children
 to study from an early age, and they are strict with their
children
 from an early age.
As a result
 of
this
,
children
 are growing up selfish, evil, and indifferent to their surroundings. It leads to more and more crimes among young
people
. Psychologists in their new report informed us that among the criminals, 69% of the
people
 had a bad relationship with their relatives, colleagues, and
neighborhood
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. A bad attitude towards
people
 depends on their upbringing, so
parents
 must be more lovely to their
children
.
Children
 who are in good relationships with their families do not want to do something horrible. On other hand, if
this
method
 will be begun, criminality among young
people
 will be reduced. The modern world does not need to string
parents
 and their problematic
children
. The community will be more peaceful without them. Some countries which started
this
method
 see the results.
For example
, South Korea, Sweden, and Romania are the best instances of
this
method
. In these countries,
parents
 cannot force their kids to do something hard for them. Due to
this
, crime in these countries has decreased so much, that no one will steal a bag
that is
 left on the street. In conclusion, I agree that modern
parents
 must be taught ways of communicating with their
children
 and not be a string with them because kids know better what is bad and what is good for themselves.
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