Companies spend millions each year advertising online in magazine and billboards. These adverts can often encourage people to want and buy things that they do not need. What are the positive and negative effects of consumerism?

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number of factories

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to adverting online

in

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some kind of sites and

newspapers

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in newspapers

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because it helps

to

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businessmen to sell easily their

products

and many humans are able to buy something which they want. From my point of view, it has a lot of positive sites because when

the

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companies

can

advertising

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advertise

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their

products

, they may

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achieve more success. In

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essay, I discuss both these will

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and elucidated. On the one hand, it has a number of positive

acpects

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aspects

.

First

of all,

the

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businessmen get more

benefit

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by

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from

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advertising because if the

companies

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advertise

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their things via newspapers or

internet

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the internet

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, majorities

individuals

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of individuals

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can see the product by advertising and they decided to buy a new product.

Moreover

, it is more important for mankind because

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humans want to buy

high quality

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of

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things and they need

to

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advertising

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advertise

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.

Therefore

, it is the best way to improve their

works

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.

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the statistic

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statistic

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of

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this

year, many

companies

prefer to sell any kind of

products

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the

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advertising because

this

way is more convenient for everybody.

On the other hand

, it has some disadvantages effects of it.

Firstly

, it may be more expensive for

companies

because when the

companies

advert

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their own product, they have to pay money for advertising.

Furthermore

, if individuals purchase some

products

by advertising, they may face

to

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poor quality of things because they can not

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face-to-face

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with sellers.

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,

the

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people always need to

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careful

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for

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themselves.

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, these days there

are

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a lot of fake

advertasing

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advertising

.

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Hence

, majorities individuals suffer

this

condition and they compline for poor

products

to

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of

company

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the company

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. In conclusion, they have both positive and negative effects of it.

However

,

currently

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it is very

essentional

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essential

for mankind. In my opinion, it is the best way to increase the

customers

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number of customers

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