Companies spend millions each year advertising online in magazine and billboards. These adverts can often encourage people to want and buy things that they do not need. What are the positive and negative effects of consumerism?

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to adverting online
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some kind of sites and
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because it helps
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businessmen to sell easily their
products
and many humans are able to buy something which they want. From my point of view, it has a lot of positive sites because when
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companies
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their
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achieve more success. In
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and elucidated. On the one hand, it has a number of positive
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businessmen get more
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advertising because if the
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their things via newspapers or
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the internet
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, majorities
individuals
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of individuals
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can see the product by advertising and they decided to buy a new product.
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, it is more important for mankind because
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humans want to buy
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of
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things and they need
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advertising
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.
Therefore
, it is the best way to improve their
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year, many
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the
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advertising because
this
way is more convenient for everybody.
On the other hand
, it has some disadvantages effects of it.
Firstly
, it may be more expensive for
companies
because when the
companies
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their own product, they have to pay money for advertising.
Furthermore
, if individuals purchase some
products
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poor quality of things because they can not
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with sellers.
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people always need to
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careful
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for
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themselves.
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, these days there
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a lot of fake
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advertising
.
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Hence
, majorities individuals suffer
this
condition and they compline for poor
products
to
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of
company
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the company
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. In conclusion, they have both positive and negative effects of it.
However
,
currently
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it is very
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essential
for mankind. In my opinion, it is the best way to increase the
customers
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