Q: Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on the problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
In the modern era , reporters are focusing on issues and emergencies as compared to good development . Few
masses
believe it is dangerous for society . I totally disagree with this
statement and will discuss it in the upcoming paragraphs .
To begin
with , the reasons for media
focus
on the problems
. First
and foremost reason is awareness . To explain it , if people have information about the accident like how it could happen Correct article usage
The first
then
they never try to do the same mistake that create
serious danger . Change the verb form
creates
For example
, in the year , 2015 a survey was conducted by WHO which was indicating 45
% Correct article usage
a 45
accident
rate Change preposition
of accident
reduced
by awareness through Add a missing verb
was reduced
media
focus
on problems
. Furthermore
, masses
help each other with the serious Correct article usage
the masses
problems
that happen when it is telecast by reports on television such
as floods or any disaster come in any nation then
folks start donating money , as well as , cloths
for their recovery .
Correct your spelling
clothes
On the other hand
, masses
think Correct article usage
the masses
Correct article usage
the media
media
Change noun form
media's
focus
on problems
is wasteful. Sometimes individuals have some kind of serious illness when folks listen about any dangerous problems
on any platform then
try to attempt suicide. Correct word choice
and then
For instance
, in the year , 2020 when covid came into the world news after listening
Add the preposition
tolistening
this
many of illness people died due to the fear of this
disease . But , if media
have more Correct article usage
the media
focus
on problems
then
it is possible that ill masses
become more safe
full from any serious kind of disease .
In conclusion, awareness and guidance are more important for Replace the words
safer
masses
to get safe , as well as, for strong Correct article usage
the masses
well
power which helps them to fight dangerous Change the adverb
good
illness
Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
thought
Correct your spelling
through
media
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