You are interested in scholarship programme to study at a foriegn university. Write a letter to enquire about the course. in your letter 1. Explain which course you are interested in 2. Tell what you know about the university 3. Explain why you should receive the scholarship

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Respected Sir, I am writing

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letter with regard to the overseas students’ scholarship program to study the Machine Learning course offered by your prestigious university. Sir, I have already completed my graduation in IT,

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, I want to

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enhance my learning by taking up a post-graduation course in machine learning

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Python Language. I would like to enrol in the category of foreign nationals having 60% of reservations which starts in November 2022 .

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, I am convinced that

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will be an excellent decision for me as your university offers to study a subject at an advanced level, developing personal and professional skills and it is one of the best universities in the world. I

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want to apply for a scholarship as I come from a low-income family and enrolling in the foreign education program will only be possible if I am granted financial assistance. My graduation course has a CGPA of 9.8 out of 10 and I have a part-time experience in software systems. I believe I can prove my competency for the scholarship provided that I get an opportunity. I look forward to your reply and would really appreciate your guidance. Yours faithfully, Rubina Gill

msrubinagillThu Mar 20 2025

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task achievement

Consider providing a more detailed explanation of why you find the university appealing beyond it being prestigious, such as specific faculty or research opportunities.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure each paragraph contains a clear single idea while smoothly transitioning between them to enhance coherence.

writing tone

The letter is polite and maintains a formal tone, appropriate for this type of inquiry.

content

You provided relevant information about your educational background and need for the scholarship, which strengthens your letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

202 words

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You are interested in scholarship programme to study at a foriegn university. Write a letter to enquire about the course. in your letter 1. Explain which course you are interested in 2. Tell what you know about the university 3. Explain why you should receive the scholarship

Nowadays, many people choose to get married young. Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Nowadays, more and more people engage in dangerous activities, such as sky diving and motorcycling. Are you in favor of them? Use examples to support your opinion.

Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Thebest way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.