Nowadays many people prefer to study or live in foreign countries. While studying and living abroad brings many benefits to individuals, it also has a number of disadvantages. What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, young
people
like to live abroad .mostly them come from developing
countries
to live in developed nations for better
education
,
lifestyle
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and lifestyle
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,
to
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achieve basic things in life. Many
people
described
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a better option or others
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agree
that it has
a negative aspects
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for them. I think it has both disadvantages as well as advantages in
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many cases.
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,
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individuals
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not understand the rules and regulations
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and take
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time
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any particular place. They faced complication in their studies , because every country has their own history , and have different criteria to provide
education
.
Thus
these conditions do not suitable for many
people
and they will again
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towards their own nation.
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, mankind
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forgets
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their
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, religion and
retuals
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rituals
. While making with foreign
countries
. For ,example, it is considered that
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Every ok individual who
visit
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international counties
they
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forget their mother tongue and native
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. So they
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spend their whole life
on
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in
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foreign
countries
. Moving
further
, there are numerous benefits of living in
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countries
.
therefore
, mainly
people
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who
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visits
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visit
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further
nations
they
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comes
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from developing area . So they find
the
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better opportunities for their future, like
for
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good
education
and living in urban areas of use all facilities which are important for a human being .
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main reason
of
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people
to travel developed
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regions
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that
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,
for instance
, in India state from Punjab visits due to
lack
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the lack
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of
school
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schools
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and teachers and a weak way of living so that's why most
of
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people
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the people
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vists
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visits
to enhance
the
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their
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better
life style
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lifestyle
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and
a
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earn a good source of revenue. In conclusion, there are more disadvantages of visiting other
countries
, while they forget their native language and culture towards attached
with
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others
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other
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culturals
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cultural
cultures
, so
government
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have to provide every
facilities
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in
thier
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their
education
and enhanced the way of living.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural diversity
  • Language immersion
  • Self-reliance
  • Career advancement
  • Academic excellence
  • Homesickness
  • Culture shock
  • Cost of living
  • Language barrier
  • Visa regulations
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