Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacations. Give the advantages of both and express your own point of view

Holidays take an important role in our life. There is a discussion among people about having a couple of short periods of vacations or single long-term vacations for
students
. In my
opinion
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both have considered different benefits in our life. Generally, most of the
students
are excited when they are waiting for the closing
time
of school. A long period of study is not efficient when we compare it with short terms. Lots of research show that taking a
vacation
helps us to relax and concentrate more when we turn back to school or work.
Therefore
, more than one
vacation
help pupils to be ready for school and more refreshed.
On the other hand
,
students
can arrange each
holiday
for different purposes and don't need to make everything in one long
holiday
.
However
, it requires well-organized
time
management and a bunch of money because on each
holiday
families will face off with lots of expenses.
On the contrary
, getting a single
vacation
has different advantages,
such
as making long-duration plans, travelling overseas countries or staying somewhere as long is it possible.
In addition
, making plans at one
time
for a long period is fairly beneficial, if the parents work and don't have the opportunity to take an annual
holiday
whenever they want. With
this
, caretakers can consume
time
with their children. In conclusion, studying takes a long duration of our lives and
students
to require to rest as much as possible. Quality of
vacation
is as important as quantity, so
students
or people who are related to study should take holidays as much as possible.
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