You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is

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Dear Sir or Madam,  I am writing
this
letter to inquire about the facilities and services of your
gym
, as I recently moved to
this
area.
Firstly
, I was planning to join your
gym
for 6 months.
However
, I do not have any idea about the types of memberships that you have.
Due to
that, it would be great if you could provide me with your membership plans and the cost of each, so I can make my choice. 
In addition
to
this
, my past
gym
had many other facilities that were included in my package,
for example
,
zumba
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, HIIT training, swimming classes, and yoga, and I enjoyed them all. That's why I wanted to make sure
if
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your
gym
is
also
offering these services. 
Moreover
, as per my knowledge, all gyms have different joining processes;
for instance
, some gyms have a biweekly payment system. So, let me know which way would be quick to become a member of your
gym
.  I am looking forward to hearing back from you.  Yours faithfully, Namita
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