You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inquire about the facilities and services of your

gym

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, as I recently moved to

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area.

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, I was planning to join your

gym

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for 6 months.

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, I do not have any idea about the types of memberships that you have.

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that, it would be great if you could provide me with your membership plans and the cost of each, so I can make my choice.

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, my past

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had many other facilities that were included in my package,

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zumba

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, HIIT training, swimming classes, and yoga, and I enjoyed them all. That's why I wanted to make sure

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your

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also

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offering these services.

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, as per my knowledge, all gyms have different joining processes;

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, some gyms have a biweekly payment system. So, let me know which way would be quick to become a member of your

gym

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. I am looking forward to hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Namita

Submitted by namitabhoj1610 on Tue Jun 04 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure a smooth flow by using connectors between paragraphs.

greeting and closing

The letter opens with a polite greeting and ends with a respectful closing.

complete response

All necessary questions and information requests are clearly addressed.

suitable writing tone

The tone of the letter is appropriate and respectful, maintaining a formal standard throughout.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

173 words

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