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Band 6

You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter describe the problem say how long it has been a problem explain what action you want the neighbour to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

#neighbour #action #addresses
Hi Sitha, I am writing to inform you of the access restrictions to the street parking lot. I have noticed that accumulated fallen leaves have been on our street parking lot for a fortnight.
Initially
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 it was a small potion and I was able to park my vehicle without any hazel but now it is quite significant.
As a result
, I am unable to utilize the space for parking purposes.
Further
, I have to travel a few more meters to find another parking which is quite uncomfortable for me as these days
weather
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are
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 not perfect have a walk. I believe
,
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we are not liable for
this
 issue. It would be appreciated if you could remove the waste by way of collecting it in to garbage bin and inform the local authority for collection.If you want any support I am available during weekdays after 5.00 p.m. Just shoot me a text or ring me ,
I
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will be there for you. Look forward to hearing from you.
Your
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 Sincerely Aravinda
Submitted by aravindasajith on

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coherence cohesion
Consider organizing the information into distinct paragraphs to improve readability and logical flow. For example, one paragraph can describe the problem, another can explain its duration, and a third can suggest the desired actions.
task achievement
Be mindful of minor grammatical and punctuation errors, such as 'hazel' which should be 'hassle' and 'it would be appreciated' which might be better as 'I would appreciate it.' These do not significantly impact the message but can affect overall clarity.
task achievement
The letter clearly addresses the problem, indicates the duration, and specifies the requested actions, fulfilling the task requirements effectively.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and considerate, which is appropriate for the context of writing to a neighbor about a problem.
coherence cohesion
Greetings and closing are done well, maintaining a courteous and respectful tone throughout the letter.

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