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In some countries today, there is an attitude that anyone can do it in the arts-music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result, people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated. Do you agree or disagree?

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Mindset is the most important to someone being a successful person. Some populations in some countries are smart to do many things
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 as arts-music, literature, acting, art, and more.
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people
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 with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is unvalued. In my opinion,I do not agree with
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 issue and in the following paragraph reasons that I do not agree will be expanded. Before the conclusion will be reached.
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 with, studying is essential for
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 to develop their mindset, so it means
people
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 who need to be rich and get known need to hard work for their targets.
attitude
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 only be a guideline for them, but if they do not work hard for it, it does not make a dream come true.
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, Warren Buffet is a famous investor. He spends a lot of time to do in what he is interested in, so he becomes the richest person in the world.
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 is
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 important, but it should parallel hard work. they can do anything with
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 but not in deep. So they do not be perfect in their role. They are just ordinary
people
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 ,not ones special. They need to be a geek in their interests.
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, Mark Zuckerberg, He efforts to develop a social platform called Facebook. He has an
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 and is hard-working to do
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 platform. Eventually, Facebook becomes the
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 social platform. In conclusion, Being successful
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 have not only
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. They need to learn in deep about their roles and spend a lot of time on them.
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