In some countries today, there is an attitude that anyone can do it in the arts-music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result, people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated. Do you agree or disagree?

Mindset is the most important to someone being a successful person. Some populations in some countries are smart to do many things
such
as arts-music, literature, acting, art, and more.
Therefore
,
people
with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is unvalued. In my opinion,I do not agree with
this
issue and in the following paragraph reasons that I do not agree will be expanded. Before the conclusion will be reached.
To begin
with, studying is essential for
people
to develop their mindset, so it means
people
who need to be rich and get known need to hard work for their targets.
attitude
only be a guideline for them, but if they do not work hard for it, it does not make a dream come true.
For example
, Warren Buffet is a famous investor. He spends a lot of time to do in what he is interested in, so he becomes the richest person in the world.
On the other hand
,
attitude
is
also
important, but it should parallel hard work. they can do anything with
attitude
but not in deep. So they do not be perfect in their role. They are just ordinary
people
,not ones special. They need to be a geek in their interests.
For instance
, Mark Zuckerberg, He efforts to develop a social platform called Facebook. He has an
attitude
and is hard-working to do
this
platform. Eventually, Facebook becomes the
first
social platform. In conclusion, Being successful
people
have not only
attitude
. They need to learn in deep about their roles and spend a lot of time on them.
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