Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays,
children
enjoy taking few
hours on their smartphones not only for Correct article usage
a few
playing
games but Replace the word
play
also
doing
other activities. Change the verb form
to do
This
probably happen
because Change the verb form
happens
some
reasons Change preposition
of some
such
as the
accessibility Correct article usage
apply
becomes
easier, and some parents are not really restricting them Change the verb form
become
in
using Change preposition
from
the
smartphones. Correct article usage
apply
However
, I think this
can lead to more negative development instead
of the
positive since Correct article usage
apply
children
can access inappropriate content
and it can diminish their interest in other playing method
.
Change the wording
another playing method
other playing methods
To begin
with, children
is
still vague in choosing what Correct subject-verb agreement
are
content
suit for
them despite some Change preposition
apply
content
are
created for Wrong verb form
being
children
. In addition
, they tend to choose type
of activities Add an article
the type
those
make them happy without considering the negative sides. If they Correct pronoun usage
that
watching
or Wrong verb form
watch
playing
some games without Wrong verb form
play
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their parent's
parent's
control, it can lead to brain Fix the agreement mistake
parents'
damages
and affect their behaviour. Fix the agreement mistake
damage
For instance
, children
who lost their parent's attention and get stuck with porn movies even in cartoon illustration, research Change preposition
in children
have
shown that their part of Correct subject-verb agreement
has
brain
which is Add an article
the brain
pre-frontal
cortex might disrupt. Correct article usage
the pre-frontal
As a result
, those threats could affect the related brain function if parents do not control their children
activity.
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children's
On the other hand
, children
who addicted
to Add a missing verb
are addicted
the
cell phone with Correct article usage
a
internet
connection might find that Add an article
an internet
this
thing is more fun for them instead
of playing outside with their friends. For example
, we can see that in this
present, Correct determiner usage
the
children
often hold their smartphone
longer than in the previous era. They tend to spend Fix the agreement mistake
smartphones
they
leisure time Correct pronoun usage
their
by
playing with their phone Change preposition
apply
instead
of going outside and seeking another activity. Hence
, many traditional child entertainments had gone and not being an option because it was not attractive anymore.
To conclude, it is obvious that spending many times in
smartphones is a bit negative development for Change preposition
on
children
because it can lead to unsuitable content
and children
might lose their
interest to grab Correct pronoun usage
apply
a
better entertainment.Correct article usage
apply
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