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The nuclear family is well adapted to moving due to its size. Do you think children benefit in any way from moving? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

#size #children #benefit
In
this
 modern era, the husband and wife with their kids become fully independent.
This
 new lifestyle has a lot of drawbacks and
also
, has many benefits.My opinion, I strongly believe
this
 kind of life should not be common for several reasons.
Firstly
,
this
 kind of relationship with family will lead societies to serious consequences,
such
 as losing their cultural identity, which means the
children
 gain the traditional knowledge of their grandfather or their grandmother.The aim of staying with grands not only for food or drinks, when the
children
 stay with their grandfathers can certainly learn a lot of useful information that helps them to live safely .The school will not give our
children
 opportunities to learn about their ancestor's culture, they will teach them in general or as facts.Through these ,actions we will stop passing our expensive culture
,
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 when the
children
 listen to grandfathers' stories that empower them.
secondly
, I believe that the parents will be away from their
children
 for a short or long time, in
this
 situation who will look after these
children
, for
this
 I wonder how the nuclear family manage to find a solution to
this
 dilemma,they may claim that they will put them in schools, that may work for short times but will not work long period.If the parents die who will take care of the
children
, the government can do that, only the relatives can take care of these
children
.
This
 is an important drawback because it leads to having weak kids. To sum up, the nuclear family may seem more attractive,
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 it has a lot of serious problems, that prevent our societies move forward.
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