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With the rise of ebooks comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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The technological revolution caused some major changes in the shape of our lives, like the way of reading, it is argued that electronic
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 made
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 dump
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 its bad effects.
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, ebooks made the life of knowledge seekers easier, In the past,
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the community
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 used to visit the library and go through a complex
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 borrowing process, which consumes their time and effort,
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, electronic
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 help
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 in solving the problem of finding a space for their
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, today all the individual has to do is to download the book he wants from the Internet on his laptop or Ibad
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 of buying a bunch of
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 suffer to find a place for it.
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, these ebooks lead
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 to some hazardous health issues, like complaining about eyes pain because of the harmful radiation become from the screens of computers, publishers
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 have some concerns about the way
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 get these types of
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 since the Internet is full with stolen copies that a student can install without buying a penny, elderly
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 can become bothered of holding a laptop idea and start reading from it, they believe that
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 as heritage and good habit that they don't want to abandon, so when the market starts running out of
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 could annoying them. In conclusion, governments and authorities should provide
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 with both types of reading, and find the right place for saving
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 as their value will increase with the drop in their numbers, but at the same time, there should be hard work to convert priceless
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 to ebooks to keep them from loss.
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